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WANG CHUN Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

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00I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not.02pre
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00If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them.02pre
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001. 00Given that the result of the research is controversial concerning moral, ethics or, world peace, I don’t think the investment is worth and acceptable. 00 1.02br
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0Here's some improvement. Try not to be so wordy:02br 02br 001. 02br 02br 002.

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001. 00The research results are controversial concerning morals, ethics and world peace, so I do not think the investment is worth it.02br
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002. Although creating an appealing image is a means of attracting attention, the reality behind the image is much more important than the image i

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