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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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I need your correction and your opinion about my essay

Women, or slaves???

Its a question that will never can be answered clearly and logically

In some country or some tradition, women seem like a creature who have to take care her husband and children. Some of them think that that job is like a slave's job. But some others say that its a great and good job.
Some women say that future woman don't need to do all of the mom's activity, even they don't like in having a child anymore. They think that having a child is a kind of jail, because by having a child, women are not freely doing anything they like. Even, some of them think that marriage is also a kind of jail, because if they are married, then their freedom will be stolen by their husband. Well, if all women think like this, then how is the world will be? no baby means no life, no off sprigs right??

Well, to be a woman is hard. In biological view, for example, when they get menstruation, they will be hurt. even in pre-and -post menstruation, they will feel not good too. When they pregnant, they also feel not good. When they born her baby, they feel its really hurt. That's why there is a story when some body asked to a wise man "who is the person that i must respect in?" and the wise man said, " the first one is your mom, the second one is your mom, the third one is your mom, then the fourth one is your dad" Does it make a sense?
  
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