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I couldn't stand sleeping in hotel rooms. There seemed to be way too much negative energy, so much negative energy in fact that I could feel all the disputes, sadness among other things that pervaded the place.
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I couldn't stand sleeping in hotel rooms. There seemed to be way too much negative energy, so much negative energy in fact that I could feel all the disputes, sadness among other things that pervaded the place.
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I couldn't stand sleeping in hotel rooms. There seemed to be way too much negative energy, so much that I could feel all the disputes, sadnesses, and other emotions that pervaded the place.
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I couldn't stand sleeping in hotel rooms. There seemed to be way too much negative energy, so much that I could feel all the disputes, sadnesses, and other emotions that pervaded the place.
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