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DIVYESH PATEL 9197 Posted 10 years ago
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I need your advice to improve my writing.

Do you like to eat out or eat at home?

"No men on an Island live without food." Food has an integral role in order to support our lives. We all get basic nutritious from food. Some people may like to take eat outside; while others prefer to have food at home. In my opinion, I would like to eat at home because we can get hygienic food at home. Also, we can save money if we eat at home. I will give two hypothetical examples to support my claim.

To begin, I must say that we can only get hygienic food at home and that is not possible outside. We can use good quality vegetables and groceries at home because it is for our health. On the others hand, restaurant owners think about their profit, therefore, they people buy low-quality vegetables and groceries in order to make more profit. I will give to my personal experience when I was working in the restaurant my down town. That restaurant only serves dinner. I was a
chef in that restaurant and I have to buy all vegetables and groceries in every day morning and have to cook at night. I remember, my owner always forced me to buy cheap vegetables and if possible that use two to three days old vegetables to make more profit. Furthermore, I remember we always bought the edible oil from the bid restaurant which was next to our restaurant because they sale used oil at half price. Therefore, based upon my own experience I would like to eat only at home.

In addition, food at home is not only hygienic but also cheaper than outside food. We have to spend money only on the require materials for cooking where as in restaurant they charge for their services and place also. There is no doubt that we can get more items if we eat outside and that is not possible at home but all those items demand money. Furthermore, we can make food items with respect to our taste and that can not possible in the restaurant because they use their standard recipes. For instance, I can recall my last year birthday party experience. I remember we five friends together went to one pizza restaurant in my down town. We enjoyed a lot and had wonderful dinner with red wine but I paid hundred dollars for all of us. I wan so expensive to me. On the others hand, my friend Frank gave us party yesterday at his home. His mother made five different types of pizza and garlic bread. We were ten people in that party and we enjoy a lot. We told me that it cost only eighty dollars only to him. For this example, we can clearly say that if we make same food that restaurant serve at home then we can save a lot of money.

In conclusion, I must say that eating food outside is not an albatross on once' neck but if we think about our health and money then we should eat food at home.
  

Top answer

No men on an Island live without food . I have no idea what the above sentence means. It may be an idiom from your native language, but it doesn't work in English.

  • No men on an Island live without food .
  • I have no idea what the above sentence means.
  • It may be an idiom from your native language, but it doesn't work in English.
  • Food has an integral role in order to support is such an important thing in our lives.
  • We all get basic nutritious from food.
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No men on an Island live without food.
I have no idea what the above sentence means. It may be an idiom from your native language, but it doesn't work in English.
Food has an integral role in order to support is such an important thing in our lives. We all get basic nutritious from food. However, while s
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Thank you for your kind help. Can I ask you one favor about my last paragraph for which you said it does not have clear theme. Can you help me by giving example with respect to my that reason.
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DIVYESH PATEL 9197Do you like to eat out or eat at home?
This sentence is grammatically correct but could sound more natural:
  • Do you like to eat out or stay home? (you could like both)
  • Do you prefer to eat out or dine in? (which do you like more?)
  • Do you prefer eating out or dinin
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yes now I came to know how to start my opinion. Can I ask you one thing? What about my reasons ? Is it mention correctly or I can make change in it?
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SoSaysSunnyEat Out or Dine In?
This is not very natural. It's excessively formal in the context of eating at home, unless you mean a formal meal at home for a special occasion. For general, everyday meals at home it would be more natural to write eat out or eat at home, or, eat out or at home.
SoSaysSunnyEating Out or Dini
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Eat Out or Dine In? Eating Out or Dining In?

Anonymous This is also excessively formal. For general, everyday meals at home it would be more natural to write eating out or eating in.
In general, dining is more formal/expensive than eating.

HOWEVER ...

In America (newspapers, magazines, TV, people I kno
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SoSaysSunnyIn America (newspapers, magazines, TV, people I know), the two choices are usually phrased eat out or dine in,
That explains it. It's one of the many differences in American English.

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