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Nancy1982 Posted 20 years ago
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Thank you very much for speaking with me regarding the business opportunities in the City of Ly Lan. The City residents and I are very much interested in having a Stein Mart Store in Ly Lan. Many of our residents have complained that they have to drive too far to shop. A brand new Home Depot is expected to open in early Fall on Xa Lo Highway, and Nga Road at Xa Lo expansion with more than two hundred high end homes will be developed in the next couple years. The Nga Road will be directly connected to City Historic Downtown, a plan for downtown revitalization is underway, and many more planned development projects in surrounding areas. We offer outstanding services and great businesses incentives.
The City of Ly Lan is a place businesses can call home. I hope you will consider Ly Lan as your next investment destination. I have attached a packet including the City demographics, current developments, and an assessment result from the Benson Inc.
Thank you very much for your time and I look forward to working with you. If you have any questions or would like to tour the City, please do not hesitate to contact us at 458-689-8000.
Thank you very much for speaking with me regarding the business opportunities in the City of Ly Lan. The City residents and I are very much interested in having a Stein Mart Store in Ly Lan. Many of our residents have complained that they have to drive too far to shop. A brand new Home Depot is expected to open in early Fall on Xa Lo Highway, and Nga Road at Xa Lo expansion with more than two hundred high end homes will be developed in the next couple years. The Nga Road will be directly connected to City Historic Downtown, a plan for downtown revitalization is underway, and many more planned development projects in surrounding areas. We offer outstanding services and great businesses incentives.
The City of Ly Lan is a place businesses can call home. I hope you will consider Ly Lan as your next investment destination. I have attached a packet including the City demographics, current developments, and an assessment result from the Benson Inc.
Thank you very much for your time and I look forward to working with you. If you have any questions or would like to tour the City, please do not hesitate to contact us at 458-689-8000.
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Thank you very much for speaking with me about the business opportunities in the City of Ly Lan. The City residents and I are very much interested in having a Stein Mart Store in Ly Lan. Many of our residents have complained that they have to drive very far to shop.
- Thank you very much for speaking with me about the business opportunities in the City of Ly Lan.
- The City residents and I are very much interested in having a Stein Mart Store in Ly Lan.
- Many of our residents have complained that they have to drive very far to shop.
- A brand new Home Depot is expected to open in early Fall near Xa Lo Highway.
- Nga Road at Xa Lo is scheduled for expansion with more than two hundred high-end ( or luxury ) homes to be developed in the next two years.
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Thank you very much for speaking with me about the business opportunities in the City of Ly Lan. The City residents and I are very much interested in having a Stein Mart Store in Ly Lan. Many of our residents have complained that they have to drive very far to shop. A brand new Home Depot is expected to open in early Fall near Xa Lo Highway. Nga Road at Xa Lo is scheduled for expansion with more t
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