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Exodus74 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

I need to prepare the topic about crime

I need to prepare the topic about crimecould you please help me make these sentences correctlyThe crimes are often committed in our corrupt world, criminals often pay off from jail with the help of bribery. And it turns out it?s like commit no crime. I think it's they only pay off from the people but they can not pay off God because of everything in this world have to pay, and they, too, will reach payback. In the city of Pervomaysk four months ago the girl was hit by a car. A golden youth knocked down to her on the sidewalk. The dead girl's parents still can not find justice. The culprit of the accident is still at large. The driver who was behind the wheel, simply bribed investigators and escaped punishment. He did it through connections. Do you believe that evil is coming back?Drivers often payed off the inspectors when they violate traffic rules and they can be successful. December 7, 1011 President of Russia openly allowed to pay off from criminality. He signed a package of amendments designed to liberalize the criminal code of the Russian Federation. He said that those who committed the crime, may avoid criminal liability if they fully indemnify and pay a fine of five times the amount of damage.In medieval the Pope also allowed to buy indulgences. In our life nothing goes unnoticed. For all we have to pay. Even if you did something for myself, thinking is good for you or your, but stepping on the other, bringing suffering to others, then it is come back wether you want it or not. We are responsible for all of our actions - both good and not very much. We are all guests on this planet. And of course, everything come back to the style of a boomerang. You run, and then come back, even if you do not wait. You need to be thankful for all, even this, because this test is therefore passed through the trials you get more instead of. We must not weary in well doing and goods you to come back to you three times. Everything what we do is come back to whom - that once, and to whom, then later. Thank you in advance
  

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Hi, I tried to change your sentences into more natural English. There are still some places that I don't understand. The C rimes are often committed in our corrupt world, and criminals often pay off from get out of jail with the help of bribery.

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  • Hi, I tried to change your sentences into more natural English.
  • There are still some places that I don't understand.
  • The C rimes are often committed in our corrupt world, and criminals often pay off from get out of jail with the help of bribery.
  • it's as if they like commit ted no crime.
  • I think it's they only that they may pay off from the people but they can not pay off ***.
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Hi,
I tried to change your sentences into more natural English. There are still some places that I don't understand.

The Crimes are often committed in our corrupt world, and criminals often pay off from get out of jail with the help of bribery.
it's as if they like committed no crime.
I think it's they o
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It’s my speculation the reason why bad things can happen to peopleBecause today we are reaping what we sowed before
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I mean is this we should sow goodness and we will reap goodness three times over. Some people receive it once, and some people receive it later.
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Hi;
You are mixing a couple of Biblical metaphors. A good writer knows and carefully uses metaphors and sayings. It is a sign of being well-read. But when using metaphors, quotations, or sayings, it is best to use the original version.

1) As you sow so shall you reap. (It applies to evil as well as good)
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