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There are social, medical, and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones.

What forms do they take?

Do you agree with the problems of mobile phones outweigh the benefits?

Mobile phones can be seen as an indispensable thing that people cannot live without them. Although, it was said that mobile phones have brought about disadvantages more than the advantages. However, I think this is misjudged and the discussion in the following essay will make it clearer.

To begin with, the concrete beneficial example is cell phones help some people live far from each other shorten the distance just by a cheap call. Currently, some teenagers make money virtually from phones by a job called KOL, an influencer. They just need to post their outfits on Instagram or Facebook to advertise that brand name clothes and that is how they earn money. Besides, these wireless technologies have helped to raise many startup companies or small businesses all over the world and have engaged a large portion of the population to be employed. Last but not least, with the various function of technologies nowadays, we can receive some bills by email without getting the papers. From that, it has reduced the trash amount significantly and saving our green environment.

Though I agree that, there are lots of negative effects of using cell phones. Surfing the mobile phone while plugged in the phone charger can be exploded and cause some serious injuries to the users. Or kids in the small age easy to get addicted in online and affect their studying.

Despite all those bad effects, I do believe we can fix those things if we are more cautious and giving solutions to solving. In my opinion, I strongly think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages and mobile phones will have a big impact on society and human beings.