Can you guys help me polish these sentences up? I have a feeling they're incorrect. The underlined parts are what makes me doubtful but if you could overlook the whole sentences I'd be grateful.
1. What would be your choice of/for a good zoom lens for this camera? 2. I can't recognize him from his face. 3. I'm sure it was him as I recognized him after/from the little scar over his left eyebrow.
4. If I were to switch/change my camera for something newer I'd go for the new Olympus.
5. That's not exactly the point I wanna inquire about. 6. There are so many cameras on the market and I'm thinking about getting myself something new.
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Two more sentences... 7. I own a Panny 45-200 lens but I'm not very satisfied with it.
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Two more sentences...
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I own a Panny 45-200 lens but I'm not very satisfied with it.
I bought it 'cause it was cheaper than the 40-150 Olly and I'm not really eager on getting that/this one either.
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7. I own a Panny 45-200 lens but I'm not very satisfied with it. I bought it 'cause it was cheaper than the 40-150 Olly and I'm not really eager on getting that/this one either.