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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
I need to make this sentence correct and short
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I am writing a letter of Motivation, i wonder if this sentence is correct? actually i want to keep it more short and to the point. can any one help me fixing it. thanks
"My thesis involves different stages, started from modification of existing Electronic circuitry along with establishing of a Wireless communication using IEEE protocol for data transmission and ends up on development of Graphical User Interface in VB"
Regards
Alishba
I am writing a letter of Motivation, i wonder if this sentence is correct? actually i want to keep it more short and to the point. can any one help me fixing it. thanks
"My thesis involves different stages, started from modification of existing Electronic circuitry along with establishing of a Wireless communication using IEEE protocol for data transmission and ends up on development of Graphical User Interface in VB"
Regards
Alishba
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My thesis examines/explores/recounts the modification of existing electronic circuitry , the establishment of wireless communication using IEEE protocol for data transmission , and the development of a graphical user interface in VB.
- My thesis examines/explores/recounts the modification of existing electronic circuitry , the establishment of wireless communication using IEEE protocol for data transmission , and the development of a graphical user interface in VB.
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My thesis examines/explores/recounts the modification of existing electronic circuitry, the establishment of wireless communication using IEEE protocol for data transmission, and the development of a graphical user interface in VB.
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