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Guest Posted 22 years ago
Grammar

I need to know whats wrong with this sentence.

Ive gotten in a grammer arguement and I need to prove that this sentence is messed up but im not very good at all this. heres the sentence.

Perhaps you need to work on your social skills, and while you're at it, the grammar could use a wee bit of a touch up as well.
  

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Perhaps you need to work on your social skills, and while you're at it, YOUR grammar could use a wee bit of a touch up as well if you changed the to YOUR it makes the sentence mroe cohesive, otherwise introducing grammar seems a bit odd

  • Perhaps you need to work on your social skills, and while you're at it, YOUR grammar could use a wee bit of a touch up as well if you changed the to YOUR it makes the sentence mroe cohesive, otherwise introducing grammar seems a bit odd
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Perhaps you need to work on your social skills, and while you're at it, YOUR grammar could use a wee bit of a touch up as well
if you changed the to YOUR it makes the sentence mroe cohesive, otherwise introducing grammar seems a bit odd

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