I need to creat some story on English. Please correct my story. Thank you

She’s standing at the window and looking at the white drifting clouds floating away.
He’s sitting on the sofa and carefully studying something on the I-phone.
She, “I’m not coming back…”
He (not even looking up from the I-phone) ,
“Wait! I'll make you some coffee ...”
She, “Your coffee machine is automatic”, smiled and added, “ Just press a button. Coffee was ready five minutes ago ...”
He (looking up from the I-phone and looking up at her), “Don’t hurry. I'm warming up the car. It’s cold outside ...”
She: “Recently you added a Remote Start to my car. Just push the button. I warm up the car…”
He(getting up), ”I‘ll help you to get down. The stair steps are steep “
She , “Don’t worry, darling. I’m not wearing long dress ...”
He, “ .... What do you want?”
She, “ To hear you
To talk to you.
About the track of moonlight on the surface on the sea water ...
and the falling stars noise of Rain ... About your and my filling …