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Hi,
my friend need some text correction because his and also mine english is not good:(
I hope someone will look to this.
Thank you guys so much.
Let me introduce myself:
My name is Matej Soják Iam 23 years old and I love video games. Games are in my life from early beginning. Back then games was unique, every game developer tried create somethink new, invent new game mechanisms but now I see just FPS and games without any inovating ideas. I want to introduce my game - Cubes and Zombies.
About game:
Cubes and Zombies is Fantasy Zombie Survival RPG game where you must protect crystal in middle of map and survive zombies attacks. As in any RPG you leveling up, assigning stat points to strength, agility, intellect and develop your character by perks/traits/talents. Day and night is changing - in day player tried collect enough food to survive and some resources to prepare to night fight with zombies. Player can build ramparts, watch towers,... to protect crystal and them self. Because Iam possesed by cubes and randomnes, you can expect randomly generated items and most important the world. Iam not talking about proceduraly generated world like many games in market but about somethink very very different and I believe unique. Let me tell you.
World is constantly changing:
In the game we have one large central cube with crystal what player try prottect and around this big cube are small cubes that are randomly generated. Each side of cube have randomly generated terrain with randomly generated trees, flowers, rocks,... on them. These cubes are ROTATING over time. This element have huge impact to gameplay. For example when is grassland on most of cubes player have lots of food and resources to prepare to night, on the other hand when is most of terrain desert food is very rare and player must discover different way how to prepare and survive.
To see how is world cube generated and rotate click here.
I will love to work on this project as a full time job. More money mean more free time and more time for add and think new ideas. I believe this game deserve your attention.
my friend need some text correction because his and also mine english is not good:(
I hope someone will look to this.
Thank you guys so much.
Let me introduce myself:
My name is Matej Soják Iam 23 years old and I love video games. Games are in my life from early beginning. Back then games was unique, every game developer tried create somethink new, invent new game mechanisms but now I see just FPS and games without any inovating ideas. I want to introduce my game - Cubes and Zombies.
About game:
Cubes and Zombies is Fantasy Zombie Survival RPG game where you must protect crystal in middle of map and survive zombies attacks. As in any RPG you leveling up, assigning stat points to strength, agility, intellect and develop your character by perks/traits/talents. Day and night is changing - in day player tried collect enough food to survive and some resources to prepare to night fight with zombies. Player can build ramparts, watch towers,... to protect crystal and them self. Because Iam possesed by cubes and randomnes, you can expect randomly generated items and most important the world. Iam not talking about proceduraly generated world like many games in market but about somethink very very different and I believe unique. Let me tell you.
World is constantly changing:
In the game we have one large central cube with crystal what player try prottect and around this big cube are small cubes that are randomly generated. Each side of cube have randomly generated terrain with randomly generated trees, flowers, rocks,... on them. These cubes are ROTATING over time. This element have huge impact to gameplay. For example when is grassland on most of cubes player have lots of food and resources to prepare to night, on the other hand when is most of terrain desert food is very rare and player must discover different way how to prepare and survive.
To see how is world cube generated and rotate click here.
I will love to work on this project as a full time job. More money mean more free time and more time for add and think new ideas. I believe this game deserve your attention.
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Here is how I would word it (changes are in usually in bold, spelling corrections are underlined): Let me introduce myself: My name is Matej Soják. I am 23 years old and I love video games. Games have been in my life from my early days .
- Here is how I would word it (changes are in usually in bold, spelling corrections are underlined): Let me introduce myself: My name is Matej Soják.
- I am 23 years old and I love video games.
- Games have been in my life from my early days .
- Back then, each game was unique and every game developer tried to create something new, to invent new game mechanisms, but today I just see FPS and games without any innovating ideas.
- So I want to introduce to you my game - Cubes and Zombies.
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Here is how I would word it (changes are in usually in bold, spelling corrections are underlined):
Let me introduce myself:
My name is Matej Soják. I am 23 years old and I love video games. Games have been in my life from my early days. Back then, each game was unique and every game developer tried to create something new, to in
Let me introduce myself:
My name is Matej Soják. I am 23 years old and I love video games. Games have been in my life from my early days. Back then, each game was unique and every game developer tried to create something new, to in
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