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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

I need someone to help correct my grammer only. Thanks!

I would appreciate if someone help correct my grammer only nothing else. Just Grammer. To whom that correct my grammer...
Thank You so Much!

Jason M

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Hello, there were only a few grammar mistakes. However, I must say that the text is very repetitive, I mean the ideas are very repetitives and you should check that. Jason M Additionally, Science is all around us and not many of us know that.

  • Hello, there were only a few grammar mistakes.
  • However, I must say that the text is very repetitive, I mean the ideas are very repetitives and you should check that.
  • Jason M Additionally, Science is all around us and not many of us know that.
  • In this case, "Cool Science for curious kids" is an excellent website where children of all ages can learn the fundamental of general science all in a click of a button.
  • The best thing about this site is that it was created by The Howard Hughes Medical Institute which means that this site is a good site for kids because this site offers both online and offline science for children of all ages.
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Hello, there were only a few grammar mistakes. However, I must say that the text is very repetitive, I mean the ideas are very repetitives and you should check that.

Jason M

Additionally, Science is all around us and not many of us know that. In this case, "Cool Science for curious kids" is an excellent website where children of all ages can learn the fundamental of general scie
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Hi.
First of all, i believe it is grammar* not grammer.
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this site is always up to date and the information that it provides are very accurate'' i would put is* very accurate.

Many of the hand on activities involves - involve*

'' that’s why this site it very interactive'' - it is* very interactive....

'' because it allow them '' - allows*

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