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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing

I need someone to correct my cover letter to match the position advertised. Can anybody help me please?

My Cover Letter:



January 28, 2009

Dr. S. W., Committee

Department of Hort. and Land. Arch.











Dear Dr. W. and the Search Committee,

I am pleased to submit an application for the recently advertised position in Production Systems for Specialty Crops (002138-2008).

I am a postdoctoral researcher with good experiences both on the research and in the teaching area. I have worked as an assistant professor in the of , on of the biggest and oldest Universities in for three yeas. Now I am in as a post doc. My experiences as an assistant professor in the and my extensive experiences as a university teacher in many other universities will make an asset in this regard. I also have a lot of experiences working and doing research on the different systems for raising horticultural crops and their nutrition.

I feel that my extensive experiences in plant science research and teaching, my good writing and oral communication along with my abilities in writing proposals and analyzing huge amount of data will be promising in this regard. In the enclosed you will see my current Curriculum vitae.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I hope to have the opportunity to discuss the opening with you soon.



Sincerely Yours,
T. S. T.
http://www.hort.purdue.edu
  

Top answer

You've missed out the most impotant part - "a letter of application that includes a statement of professional goals for their research and teaching program "

  • You've missed out the most impotant part - "a letter of application that includes a statement of professional goals for their research and teaching program "
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You've missed out the most impotant part -

"a letter of application that includes a statement of professional goals for their research and teaching program"

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