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Reality Shows

Introduction:

Reality television is a genre of television programming which presents purportedly unscripted dramatic or humorous situations, documents actual events, and usually features ordinary people instead of professional actors.

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The example of reality show is : Americal idol .

The program seeks to discover the best singer in the country through a series of nationwide auditions. Who is won in this series are very poplary and usually

Go ahead for example : leona lewis has won in American Idol one and very famous.

In addition , others has appears in Americal Idol but not won in first one they advance in their career and they has been invited by guest programs

Inconclusion:

I'm for because the reality show Americam idol gives chance to young boys to create a very famous career.

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). An example of a reality show is Americal idol . This program seeks to discover the best singer in the country through a series of nationwide auditions.

  • ).
  • An example of a reality show is Americal idol .
  • This program seeks to discover the best singer in the country through a series of nationwide auditions.
  • (Who is won in this series are very poplary and usually ) - this sentence doesn't make any sense.
  • Go ahead For example, Leona Lewis has won in American Idol one and is now very famous.
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It's very obvious that you did not write the introduction yourself; I don't know if that might cause you a problem tomorrow (are you making this speech in a class?).

An example of a reality show is Americal idol .

This program seeks to discover the best singer in the country through a series of nationwide auditions.

(Who is won in this series are
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Thanks for help,
What are you recommend me in this wrong sentences:
(Who is won in this series are very poplary and usually ) - this sentence doesn't make any sense.
In addition , others has appears in Americal Idol but not won in first one they advance in their career and they has been invited by guest programs - there are several verb tense problems in this sentence, and the highli

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