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BeginStudent Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

I need someone check my grammar's writing

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00I 01b00wrote02b00 a paragraph 01b00for02b00 my 01b00E02b00nglish teacher and 01b00I02b00 will need to give it to her tomorrow .02br
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00This paragraph01b00 is about 02b00responsibility:02br
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00A responsible person is someone who makes good decisions about things, someone who can be trusted to do things that they are supposed to.02br
00Do you think it is good for someone to be like that? 02br
00I think it is good to be like that because the 00responsible person00 always 01b00does02b00 what01b00 is02b00 necessary on time , it is good 00habit00.02br
00Do you think you are like that?02br
00I think that I'm responsible person and I will prove 01b00it 02b00to my English teacher in future.02br
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00Summary , I 00learnt a lesson00 00 00in01b00 my02b00 English project and I promise I will be more responsible in next time.02br
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00Thanks.0-
  

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0I think your paragraph is pretty good. There are a few touches that could improve it, though. 02br 02br 00 In the first sentence, I would suggest a dash instead of a comma--suggesting an added on thought to reinforce the first one.

— Spides

  • 0I think your paragraph is pretty good.
  • There are a few touches that could improve it, though.
  • 02br 02br 00 In the first sentence, I would suggest a dash instead of a comma--suggesting an added on thought to reinforce the first one.
  • " This is because the antecedent of your pronoun "they" is actually "someone"01del 00which is a singular pronoun.
  • So the pronoun referring to "someone" should be singular as well.
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0I think your paragraph is pretty good. There are a few touches that could improve it, though. 02br
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00 In the first sentence, I would suggest a dash instead of a comma--suggesting an added on thought to reinforce the first one. Also in that sentence "they are" should be "he or she is." This is because the antecedent of your pronoun "they" is actually "someone"01del
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00Somone else ?0-
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0Why don't you rewrite it based on the comments you were given.0-
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0A responsible person is someone who makes good decisions about things, someone who can be trusted to do things that they are supposed to.02br
00Do you think it is good for someone to be like that? 02br
00I think it is good to be like that because the 00responsible person00 always 01b00does02b00 what01b00 is02b00 neces
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0 Something other to fix un a paragraph?02br
00What do you advice me to do that a letter or stay with a paragraph ?02br
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00Thanks. 0-
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0A responsible person is someone who makes good decisions about things, someone who can be trusted to do 01del00things that02del00 01font00what 02font00they are supposed to.02br
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01i00Do you think it is good for someone to be like that? 02i02br
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0I can write :"00I think it is good to be like that because the 00responsible person00 always 01b00does02b00 what01b00 is02b00 necessary on tim01font00e. I02font00t is good 00habit and 01font00characteristic."02br
00is it right?02br
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0I'm sorry, I don't quite understand your question.02br
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00Were you asked to write this by your teacher because you missed a deadline? Is it really a letter of apology?0-
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0 He said my write about "Responsibilty" and touch about my case "my case is I miss the deadline of project" I think I do that good but what worth me to do a letter with it or stay with this.(BTW-The teacher tald me to do what I want a letter or a paragraph)02br
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