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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

I need someone check for my brother's letter

0Hi,02br
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00The letter is :02br
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00Dear Yossi02br
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00I have just returned from my vication in hawaii. i have been there for 2 monthes with my whole family. We had an amazing vication.02br
00I have stay a great hotel hi name is "The Palace" (5 stars) he looked so strange because it build unlike israelis buildings the building look like a real big palace the wall was shining on the night and all the good was on the night ive seen show02br
00i am recommending to go to "The Palace" hotel because you will doing so big fun and you will not disapointed02br
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00How is it ? I need some fix the mistakes, Thanks very much0-
  

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"02br 02br 00There's more, but I gotta run. 0-

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0You spelled vacation wrong and didn't capitalize I in a couple places.02br
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00You'd only say "have been" if you're still there.02br
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00"I was there for 2 months."02br
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00There's more, but I gotta run. Hopefully someone else will point out the rest.0-
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