I need some tips to write paragraph

I like this one:

http://www.bartleby.com/141/strunk5.html#9

...which doesn't imply I can follow it

Thanks , but you have something else?

«Thanks , but you have something else?»

Well, you need something else? Make your question more specific. ...Or just go google for style guides!

You do need to be more specific. What kind of feedback do you get? Do they say that your sentences aren't well connected? Do they say you have a hard time keeping your tenses consistent? Do they say you don't have enough supporting details?

A basis paragraph consists of a topic sentence that in some way says what the paragraph is about. It will have anywhere from one to three or even fou

I want to learn the connectors such as : therefore,however,but,in addiction etc.
and I want explanation how to use with them in the sentence.

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0Why don't you write a couple parapgraphs that uses a few transitions and see how it goes. Post them here and we can tell you if something sounds unnatural.0-

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