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Viva Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

i need some one to check this for me



To a doctor who we will always remember

To the one who was always there to be our brother, friend, and much more…

All the words cannot express our pleasure to know you

Thanks you for caring about us… you are so special for us

Thanks for all that you’ve done on our behalf

Graduating Batch 2006 ----> do we say it like this?



Another one:

When a person finds a precious thing, he keeps it and takes care not to lose it… that’s why we decided to keep you in our hearts for ever…

Our nice moments that we’ve shared together… we promise not to forget them







The father who did every thing to his babies

To show them the correct way to face their future

To think normally rather than abnormally

With a loving heart




and one more...

We’ll always remember your creative ways to encourage your students to learn…

with your helping hands, advices, and acts…

You were a real friend for us in need and deed




one more...

To a doctor who we have shared some moments

Although those moments were short

They were remarkable and unforgettable

Thanks for all that you’ve done on our behalf

Graduating Batch 2006



also plz check this...

To our mama

No words can express our appreciation for teaching us the foundations for our future job…

We appreciate all your hard work, it meant so much to us…




  

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Hi, Gee, that's a lot to check! Please read carefully, I've made a number of changes. Best wishes, Clive To a doctor we will always remember To the one who was always there to be our brother, friend, and much more… Words cannot express our pleasure in knowing you Thanks you for caring about us… you are so special for us Thanks for all that you’ve done on our behalf Graduating Batch 2006 ----> do we say it like this?

  • Hi, Gee, that's a lot to check!
  • Please read carefully, I've made a number of changes.
  • Best wishes, Clive To a doctor we will always remember To the one who was always there to be our brother, friend, and much more… Words cannot express our pleasure in knowing you Thanks you for caring about us… you are so special for us Thanks for all that you’ve done on our behalf Graduating Batch 2006 ----> do we say it like this?
  • >>> Graduating Class of 2006 Another one: When a person finds a precious thing, he keeps it and takes care not to lose it… that’s why we have decided to keep you in our hearts forever… Our nice moments that we’ve shared together… we promise not to forget them Another one...
  • The father who did everything for his children To show them the correct way to face their future To think normally rather than abnormally <<< You need to say this another way With a loving heart … and one more...
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Hi,

Gee, that's a lot to check!

Please read carefully, I've made a number of changes.

Best wishes, Clive

To a doctor we will always remember

To the one who was always there to be our brother, friend, and much more…

Words cannot express our pleasure
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wow thanx alot,, about "Graduating class mmm its our batch in the university---> the word class is used to school students isnt it?!!

well i didnt want my sentences to be proffessional i liked them to be a little bit funny, and mama <-- that what she liked us to call her

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