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Tommy Guilfoyle Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

I need some help with a letter to my Manger

I have to apply in writing for a contract available in store and I've drafted the following:

Address.
Address,
Adress,

Date

Dear (Manager),

I am writing to you to apply for the contact available, as advertised in store.

In support of my application I am stockroom based and I am fully flexible.

Best Regards,

_________________________
Thomas

I need help to see if the letter is ok to use or if it needs some correcting. Any help would be appreciated.
  

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Hello Tommy, Welcome to English Forums! "I am stockroom based" implies that you live in a stockroom. (eg.

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  • Hello Tommy, Welcome to English Forums!
  • "I am stockroom based" implies that you live in a stockroom.
  • (eg.
  • ) contact available - that makes no sense.
  • Perhaps you mean the "available position that was advertised in the store" I am writing to you to apply for the available position in the stockroom that was advertised in the store.
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Hello Tommy,
Welcome to English Forums!

"I am stockroom based" implies that you live in a stockroom. (eg. I am based in Japan = I live in Japan.)

contact available - that makes no sense.

Perhaps you mean the "available position that was advertised in the store"

I am writing to you to apply for the available position in the stockroom that was advertise
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