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The-oNe Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

I need some help, Please.

Hello.

This is my first shot in writing about E-Learning. Please review it and tell what do you think



E-Learning



E-Learning is one of the most and the newest technology used these days on the internet community.



· E-Learning Technologies

o Virtual classroom.

o Resource accessibility.

o Sharing Information by using (Discussion board, Wikis, and Blogs).

· E-Learning Products

o Type of Products.

o Moodle VS Blackboard.



E-Learning

E-Learning is one of the most and the newest technology used these days on the internet community. There are a lot of technologies used in the E-Learning. For instance, a virtual Classroom[u1] , which simulate the traditional way of learning in the schools, where the teachers and students can meet distinctly [u2] and discuss any topic by using the facilities and features[u3] offered in this technology[u4] . for example [u5] They can get benefits of using audio and video conference, using the electronic whiteboard, sharing desktop, and recording the meetings. Also, one of the technologies used in the E-Learning operations is resource accessibility[u6] , where the students can access remotely to lectures and assignment anytime and anywhere[u7] . In addition, teachers and students can remotely share information by using a lot of the features. For example[u8] Forum, Wikis, Blogs, and private messages)[u9] . Because of the huge uses of the E-Learning applications, most of the organizations and companies tried to invent their E-Learning application[u10] . Therefore, there are many free and paid E-Learning application. For instance, Moodle is the most popular free E-Learning application, which created by a group of developer around the world, and they provide it to the internet community as a free application[u11] . On the other hand, blackboard[u12] is the most popular paid E-Learning application, which owned by the Blackboard Inc[u13] . As matter of fact, Moodle and Blackboard have several features in common. Both have the ability to control of the course content, using live chat, Forum, Wikis, Blogs, private messages, and user control permission[u14] . The Most common differences between the Moodle and Blackboard are the price and the ability of customizing the application. In conclusion, E-Learning is one of the most and the newest technology used these days on the internet community, and its uses will be increased in the upcoming days[u15] .






[u1]

Virtual Classroom



[u2]

remotely



[u3]

the features



[u4]

CS



[u5]

For example,



[u6]

Resource Accessibility



[u7]

CS



[u8]

features. For example



[u9]

Discussion Board, Wikis, Blogs, and Private Massages



[u10]

CS



[u11]

CS



[u12]

Blackboard



[u13]

CS



[u14]

Live Chat, Forum, Wikis, Blogs, Private Messages, and Control Permission



[u15]

CS

  

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Hi The one; I've made a few suggestions on your excellent essay. It is well orgainzed, logical and clear. Good job!

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  • It is well orgainzed, logical and clear.
  • Good job!
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Hi The one;

I've made a few suggestions on your excellent essay. It is well orgainzed, logical and clear. Good job!

(Summary? Thesis statement?)

E-Learning is one of the most (most what? most popular?, fastest-growing?) and the newest technology used these days in the Internet community.

(Outline?)

· E-Learning Te

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