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Green modern Posted 9 years ago

I need some help

Reality brings some fortune and fame
They gave their offspring an unusual name
Point your journey in the right direction
Then add a check to your collection

  

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This is grammatical, but the logic is questionable. It might be better as: Life for some means fortune and fame - it may help to have an unusual name. If your life is in the right direction, you'll get rewards aplenty for your collection.

  • This is grammatical, but the logic is questionable.
  • It might be better as: Life for some means fortune and fame - it may help to have an unusual name.
  • If your life is in the right direction, you'll get rewards aplenty for your collection.
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This is grammatical, but the logic is questionable. It might be better as:


Life for some means fortune and fame -

it may help to have an unusual name.

If your life is in the right direction,

you'll get rewards aplenty for your collection.

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green modern

Reality brings some fortune and fame
They gave their offspring an unusual name
Point your journey in the right direction
Then add a check to your collection

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