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Maha86 Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing
I need some help
hi
this is maha, i really need some help
i work in a bank, in my work i'm suppose to determine risks and their impacts.
please correct me if there's any grammar mistake or if you think that the whole formulation of the sentence is not suitable
1- not sharing data between the two departments weakens the process of ongoing monitoring.
2- This will lead to an inappropriate level of payment business.
3- The lack of report prevents knowing the shortcomings in management, which may need to be adjusted or corrected.
4-The loss of the files makes the company unable to let the customer adheres to the agreed conditions
this is maha, i really need some help
i work in a bank, in my work i'm suppose to determine risks and their impacts.
please correct me if there's any grammar mistake or if you think that the whole formulation of the sentence is not suitable
1- not sharing data between the two departments weakens the process of ongoing monitoring.
2- This will lead to an inappropriate level of payment business.
3- The lack of report prevents knowing the shortcomings in management, which may need to be adjusted or corrected.
4-The loss of the files makes the company unable to let the customer adheres to the agreed conditions
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Hi Maha, Thanks for joining us. Welcome to English Forums. I'm afraid most of your sentences are over my head, and I don't get the thrust of their meanings.
- Hi Maha, Thanks for joining us.
- Welcome to English Forums.
- I'm afraid most of your sentences are over my head, and I don't get the thrust of their meanings.
- Let me take a stab at #4.
- I think "to let the customer" may not be what you mean, but I may be totally wrong.
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Hi Maha, Thanks for joining us. Welcome to English Forums.
I'm afraid most of your sentences are over my head, and I don't get the thrust of their meanings.
Let me take a stab at #4. I think "to let the customer" may not be what you mean, but I may be totally wrong. I'd say,
When we lose files, it's impossible for us to hold the customer to the agreed conditions.
I'm afraid most of your sentences are over my head, and I don't get the thrust of their meanings.
Let me take a stab at #4. I think "to let the customer" may not be what you mean, but I may be totally wrong. I'd say,
When we lose files, it's impossible for us to hold the customer to the agreed conditions.
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