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Alexandremelo Posted 16 years ago
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I need some feedback in this paragraph please. thanks

We must bear in mind that such initiative is aimed at developing an eco friendly town with its habitants living and increase income in a sustainable way. It would also be advisable to invite government authorities from other towns in the region, so the idea would be expanded.

  

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Hi Alexandremelo Do you want your paragraph edited (grammatically corrected) or do you want to understand the bold part? Tom

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Hi Alexandremelo

Do you want your paragraph edited (grammatically corrected) or do you want to understand the bold part?

Tom
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I would like to have both .
Thank you very much
Alexandre
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Both. A general correction and the part in bold please.
Thank you very much
Alexandre
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