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The given table depicts the proportion of expenditure on 3 categories in 5 distinct countries in the year 2002.

Overall, all of the indicated countries spent the majority of their budgets on food, beverages, and cigarettes, with Turkey standing out with the highest spending. Another interesting feature is that both apparel and footwear, as well as entertainment and education, had the lowest spending, meanwhile leisure and education was particularly unpopular in Spain.

With regards to food, beverages, and tobacco, the category with the most expending, made up the bulk of consumer spending in all countries, accounting for over 15% of total spending, with Turkey having the highest share at 32,8%. Furthermore, spending on food, drinks, and cigarette ranged from 15% to 19% in Italy, Spain, and Sweden, compared to less than half in Ireland and Turkey, where spending was between 28 and 33 percent.

Moving on to the last two items, garments and footwear, as well as entertainment and schooling, which together accounted for less than 10% in all countries. For spending associated with clothing and footwear, all countries expended between around 5% and 7%, with the exception of Italy, which spent exactly 9%. In terms of amusement and learning, the spending was less than 5% in all nations, especially Spain where spending was only roughly 2%.