I need help/comments on my motivation letter

Hi, I am applying for swedish institute scholarship. can you help me with my answers to the questions of scholarship application?
I really need and appreciate your help.
thanks


1. Summarize and describe your previous experiences or achievements, ambitions and goals for the future. [Max 600 characters incl. spaces].
My bachelore degree has provided me a rigorous foundation to build upon, As an honored student,I was awarded several certificates by being active in competetions,designs and researches volunteerly aside from studying efforts that gave me a vast knowledge in varried fields such as housing and Sustainablity. I am Recognized as an architect that is capable of creating new ideas and solutions to meet the complex challenges at work. My aim is to broaden my education and become an academic scholar as well as an expert to earn a respectable management position with responsibility in major projects.

2. How would the study program in Sweden affect your: [Max 600 characters incl. spaces per question]
1. Professional/Academic development: The outstanding educational system of Sweden is full of the creativity and innovation aspects that I am seeking to add to skills I acquire since I have focused on innovative Architecture in my previous projects.It helps me to engage in critical thinking and analytic mindset development in Architectural designs and would enrich me tremendously with a higher quality of education than what I might get in my region which leads me to achieve excellence in Architecture profession.I hope to continue to Postdoctoral study to pursue a career as an academic to transfer my knowledge to future Architects. 2. Personal development: I will gain effective management of work-family balance and a better quality of life. It will make me see outside of my social sphere and develop relationships outside my culture that provides a foundation of understanding of differing views. M.Arch in Sweden will develop my individual strengths and refine my personal knowledge and abilities. It gives me the chance to experience a new life among a new culture that will manipulate my perspectives. This makes me ready to face more challenges and try out things that nobody has done before so it would give me the opportunity to rediscover myself.

3. Give two examples of how the study program in Sweden would enhance your contribution to the development of your home country: [Max 600 characters incl. spaces per example]
1. Considering the high demand for Iran to get foreign educated citizens in the academia and workforce, my individual education path as a member of my country may influence many of my fellows lives, and will lead me to produce buildings of a high quality of design standards and comfortable environments which are in lack in Iran. It is my strong decision to help renovating the homeless earth-quaked parts of my country, and to achieve these purposes, I need to maintain a constant educational progress with optimistic vision for the brighter future that I posses. 2. Through the unique experience in sweden I can turn theory into practice by identifying and training young Iranian Architects with fresh visions to design and implement innovative ideas in our country and become well known to the world at large.I will lead my team to focus on enhancing the many Architecture issues in our country and worldwide such as sustainablity and workablity along with aesthetic Persian Architecture. I will attract the young generation into a unique work area to represent my home country workforce and by doing so we will contribute to resolve the unemployment issue in Iran.