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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
I need help writing this email
Can you tell me if the syntax is correct and the grammar is fine. If needed, could you make some changes.
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Hi,
How are you doing? I hope all is well.
I was wondering if we could meet up the week before the wedding to about our preparations.
I can't wait to see you because it'll mean the big day is almost upon us when we do see you.
Take care of yourself and see you in a few weeks.
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Thank you in advance
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Hi,
How are you doing? I hope all is well.
I was wondering if we could meet up the week before the wedding to about our preparations.
I can't wait to see you because it'll mean the big day is almost upon us when we do see you.
Take care of yourself and see you in a few weeks.
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Thank you in advance
Top answer
The last clause of your penultimate sentence was redundant, so I have deleted it. There was also a verb missing. Everything else is OK.
- The last clause of your penultimate sentence was redundant, so I have deleted it.
- There was also a verb missing.
- Everything else is OK.
- Hi, How are you doing?
- I hope all is well.
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The last clause of your penultimate sentence was redundant, so I have deleted it. There was also a verb missing. Everything else is OK.
Hi,
How are you doing? I hope all is well. I was wondering if we could meet up the week before the wedding to talk about our preparations. I can't wait to see you because it'll mean the big day is almost upon us!
Hi,
How are you doing? I hope all is well. I was wondering if we could meet up the week before the wedding to talk about our preparations. I can't wait to see you because it'll mean the big day is almost upon us!
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