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Purple park 749 Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

I need help with the punctuation of this sentence.

An example would be if you were at an airport waiting for your luggage to appear on the conveyor belt then you see a bag that looks just like yours approaching so you grab it and leave but when you check it you find out you grabbed the wrong bag

  

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First, this is too long for one sentence. Break it into smaller sentences, keeping to one idea in each. This is how I would do it: An example would be if you were at an airport waiting for your luggage to appear on the conveyor belt .

  • First, this is too long for one sentence.
  • Break it into smaller sentences, keeping to one idea in each.
  • This is how I would do it: An example would be if you were at an airport waiting for your luggage to appear on the conveyor belt .
  • T hen you see a bag that looks just like yours approaching .
  • So you grab it and leave , but when you check it you find out that you grabbed the wrong bag .
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First, this is too long for one sentence. Break it into smaller sentences, keeping to one idea in each. This is how I would do it:

An example would be if you were at an airport waiting for your luggage to appear on the conveyor belt. Then you see a bag that looks just like yours approaching. So you grab it and leave, but when you check it you find out th

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