I need help with the grammar, especially with commas :)

Hi,

tomorrow I must hand in my cover letter to my lecturer. Our task was to write a cover letter and a curriculum vitae. It was not very difficult to write there is maybe a problem with my grammar. I want to ask you whether you could check my grammar. Pleaseeeeeeeee

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Subject: Internship Marketing

Dear recruiter,

An employee of Berliner Flughaefen GmbH (Berlin Airports Association) told me that you offer an internship in the marketing department. As you can see in my CV I am a student at the International University of Applied Sciences XXXX , working toward my bachelor’s degree in XXXX.

My university provide me the possibility to connect my theoretical knowledge with practical experience in the fifth semester. Therefore I want to grab the chance to perform my internship at the Berlin airports which I also connect for many years with my region XXXX . I also would like to understand in practise the individual processes at the “System Airport”.

Thanks to my part-time job as waiter at the state theatre XXXX I have learned how to concentrate and focus on goals, but also that teamwork, thoroughness and commitment are important key elements for all kinds of work. Accordingly I see myself as a person who very highly values organisation skills and teamwork, and fulfil tasks which are given to me very accurately.

The enclosed curriculum vitae provide more details about my experiences and skills. If you affirm that I would be a positive addition in your team, please feel free to call me or write me an email. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Soeren XXXX

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Thanks a lot to everyone who will help me Thanks!!!!!

Greeting

Soeren