I need help with my portfolio

Hey all...

I am making my portfolio on english and like you can see not perfect So I need your help...Can someone correct my works?

There is some text that I need at least in two days...Thank you very much...

Borko

I don't know how to write nicely and corectly

because I've never had the need to write

with a pen. I have the Internet and a mobile

phone and i'm happy with it...



Our future generations don’t use their brain

because we made them much easier with all

technology that we created. They don’t know

to write nicely and corectly and they don’t have

need to learn it.

They are throwing away the chance which

more than 90% of population in 18th century

didn’t have...





You can see a plant on the right side of this page. One

part of it is dead, brown, lifeless. But other parts of it are

still very beautiful and full of life. You will probably

smile when you see these perfect yellow flowers,

but if you take a closer look at them, you will be

able to see the parts that have already died...

This flower can be compared to our planet

and our history on it. There is not much

of it left. Everything that was worth

mentioning is gone now and it is

nobody’s fault but ours... and we are

leaving all this to the future

generations to deal with...



Ask yourselves one question

and then open my portfolio...



Where and how did we

lost our world?



High heels, short skurts, in some lifes for an hour or even less...

Their first impresion is the money which seems easy to earn, but is ist really so?

This young girls only mesteake was her

deseare to be like her parents. Her parents

are smokers and this young girl think it is okay

to smoke and it is very cool and healthy...

So once again we are wrong example to

our future generations.

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No thts not a bags full of food and comsetics.

They are full of cloths and they belong to an

homeless... If they have luck they would have

a place to sleep and they are thankful. They

don’t care about wetness, dirtyness and

deseases... Nowadays it is comon problem.



Nobody care...

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Our world is a place in which is difficult to survive and make

your dreams come true.Some try and they may be successful

but most of us are satisfied with this what we achieved.We

don’t try to change almost anything and we are fine with bad

life conditions, high rates of crimes in our neihgbour, deseases

knocking on our doors... Or we are too scared to try tochange

our world to be better place for us and people that we love?



I think we need to find light and goal in our lifes. My goal was

to make this portfolio good enough for you and to proofe to

myself that I can do it. I had “black downs” and “breakdowns”

too many times and I found my light that guided me through

all the way. It was one of the very first pictures that I made

with my new camera and I was just amazed with it. You can

see it on the right side... i print it on my wall and everytime I

have toughts to throw it all away I find inspirations in it..

For this project I found my light...



Have you found your light for the project called “life”?!





The two beautiful nature pictures I took in Vienna downtown...You are

probably aware of “Stadtpark” and its beauty... I just wish more places

like this one in the world (if I forget kind of people that “works” there).



"Volksgarten” is one of the most beautiful parks I have seen.

The most beautiful plants that “mother nature” created are

placed in this park. But with mans help and sense of

creations. A man projected all so how he wanted it to be.

I don’t say it is bad or ugly, I just want to say...No, I want

to ask when we become mother nature?





Happy family is rear nowadays...

But so nice picture to see.So perfect...

Did you have one?





“Museumsquartier” is one of the most visited places by students. There they are

having some of their best weekends and parties. After those crazy weekends

the streets are full with beer bottles and other alcohol... But this glass left on the wall

in front of “Museumswurtier” is really special... Isn’t it?