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P4user Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
I need help with my periods and commas.
In my grade 12 English class my teacher got a idea to get us to add only periods, commas, semi colons, etc. Without changing any word other than making it a capital. We could have a maximum of 10 mistakes remaining or made and I did pretty bad. Can you all help me correct it?
Here is the house it is green and white it has a red door it is very pretty here is the family mother father dick and jane live in the green-and-white house they are very happy see jane she has a red dress she wants to play who will play with jane see the cat it goes meow-meow come and play come play with jane the kitten will not play see mother mother is very nice mother will your play with jane mother laugh laugh mother laugh see father he is big and strong father will you play with jane father is smiling smile father smile see the dog bowwow goes the dog do you want to play do you want to play with jane see the dog run run dog run look look here comes a friend the friend will play with jane they will play a good game play jane play
Here is the house it is green and white it has a red door it is very pretty here is the family mother father dick and jane live in the green-and-white house they are very happy see jane she has a red dress she wants to play who will play with jane see the cat it goes meow-meow come and play come play with jane the kitten will not play see mother mother is very nice mother will your play with jane mother laugh laugh mother laugh see father he is big and strong father will you play with jane father is smiling smile father smile see the dog bowwow goes the dog do you want to play do you want to play with jane see the dog run run dog run look look here comes a friend the friend will play with jane they will play a good game play jane play
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Hello P4user To correct it, you have to do it yourself. So please write your try first. Then we might help you.
- Hello P4user To correct it, you have to do it yourself.
- So please write your try first.
- Then we might help you.
- paco
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Hello P4user
To correct it, you have to do it yourself. So please write your try first. Then we might help you.
paco
To correct it, you have to do it yourself. So please write your try first. Then we might help you.
paco
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Here is the
house, it is green and white. It has a red door. It is very pretty here is
the family; mother, father, **** and jane. Live in the green-and-white
house. They are very happy see jane, she has a red dress. She wants to
play, who will play with jane. See the cat, it goes meow-meow. Come and
play, come play with jane. The kitten will not play see mother, mother is
house, it is green and white. It has a red door. It is very pretty here is
the family; mother, father, **** and jane. Live in the green-and-white
house. They are very happy see jane, she has a red dress. She wants to
play, who will play with jane. See the cat, it goes meow-meow. Come and
play, come play with jane. The kitten will not play see mother, mother is
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My try is like this. But I'm not quite sure.
Here is the house; it is green and white; it has a red door; it is very pretty. Here is the family. Mother, Father, **** and Jane live in the green-and-white house. They are very happy. See Jane. She has a red dress. She wants to play. Who will play with Jane? See the cat! It goes meow-meow. Come and play! Come to play with Jane! The kitten wi
Here is the house; it is green and white; it has a red door; it is very pretty. Here is the family. Mother, Father, **** and Jane live in the green-and-white house. They are very happy. See Jane. She has a red dress. She wants to play. Who will play with Jane? See the cat! It goes meow-meow. Come and play! Come to play with Jane! The kitten wi
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Hi,
In my grade 12 English class my teacher got a idea to get us to add only periods, commas, semi colons, etc. Without changing any word other than making it a capital.
OK, this is fun.
Here is the house. It is green and white. It has a red door. It is very pretty. Here is th
In my grade 12 English class my teacher got a idea to get us to add only periods, commas, semi colons, etc. Without changing any word other than making it a capital.
OK, this is fun.
Here is the house. It is green and white. It has a red door. It is very pretty. Here is th
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Hurm….To me kid's English is more difficult to read than the English used in technical textbooks.
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