I need help with my Motivation Letter

do you think that's enough or should I add another paragraph ? and feel free to tell me about any mistakes !

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the Accounting program as an exchange undergraduate student under the ABC program starting in September 2012. After consulting with my professors and reading the stories of the Alumni, I am confident that X University has the best Accounting program that best meets my goals and aspirations of furthering my knowledge and enhancing my skills to be able to go after my career vision. This program is a great chance for me to meet people from different backgrounds and to get to know the English culture as I have always wanted to travel to the UK.

I am currently studying as an undergraduate student at the faculty of commerce – Accounting major, Y University. And I passed the first two years with an average grade of 76%. As I believe that Accounting, Finance, and Business students have to be exposed to the market, last summer I trained at the Z Bank which made me fully aware of how the whole banking system works, also taught me how to deal with different types of people, how to negotiate with them, and how to react in certain situations. And I truly believe applying to the Accounting program at X University would provide me with the right set of skills especially because it has a lot of experienced professors.

While academic career is vitally important to me, so are my extracurricular activities. I used to be captain of the Basketball team at ZZZ Club (a local club) which taught me the great importance of teamwork. As a student-athlete I have developed strong time management skills. Furthermore, I thrive in challenging, fast-paced, chaotic environments.