Hi Tatiana, Your essay looks good on the whole! Here are some very minor changes I made: From: Tatiana *** Address, contact details ( leave 1 line space in between) To: Address Date Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to apply for the Masters Degree in Management of Development. I found out about this Masters program when I was taking a course in “Procurement Management in the World Bank funded projects” (delete course in) at the ***.
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