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Christilunsford Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

I need help with my grammar and punctuation

0I need some advice especially on the first sentence. I don't know if it is a runon or comma splice or whatever. I can't figure out how else to word it so that it conveys what I want to say. Any other advice on the short essay would help. 02br
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00Distance learning is a convenient approach to gaining an education using online classrooms where the students correspond with one another and the instructor, even though they are not face to face. Whether it's a limited amount of time, a distant campus, or a physical disability, students can gather together online with the aid of online college. The student only logs online to their course's online classroom where they can access their course syllabus, calendar, and forum. A forum is a place where topics are placed and responded to. You can have public discussions, which are often called threaded discussions because like an e-mail you can reply to a starting post and the replies to that post. This offers asynchronous communication because the students and instructors can discuss topics without being together or being online at the same time. Another component of the forum is the students individual forum where the student can turn in assignments, ask the instructor questions, and get feedback on their work from the instructor. By using the online classroom and its forums, the students and instructor receive full advantage of the course without being face to face.02br
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  • 0 00 02br 02br 00Distance learning is a convenient approach to01del 00 gaining an education02del 00 01font 00have necessary information02font 00 using online classrooms where the students01font 00 and the instructors02font 00 correspond with one another 01del 00and the instructor 02del 00 even though they are not face to face 01del 00Whether it's a02del 00 01font 00without the problems of 02font 00limited01del 00 amount of02del 00 time, a distant campus or a physical disability, students can gather together online with the aid of online college.
  • 01del 00The student only logs online to their course's online02del 00 01font 00What students have to do is just to log in,02font 01font 00 so that02font 00 01del 00classroom where02del 00 they can 01font 00have02font 00 access 01font 00to02font 00 their course syllabus, calendar, and forum.
  • A forum is a place where topics are placed and responded 01del 00to02del 00.
  • 02del 00 This offers asynchronous communication because the students and instructors can discuss topics without being together01del 00 or being online02del 00 at the same time.
  • )02font 00 assignments, ask the instructor questions, and get feedback on their work01font 00s 02font 00from the instructor01font 00s02font 00.
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