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Armold Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
I need help with my Graduate Cover Letter
Hi everyone! This is my first post in this forum. It seems to be very interesting. Thank you all of you for making this kind of places, it is so helpful for non native English speakers. Thank you.
Ok, so I´m trying to apply to a graduate position in Australia,where I´m living. I want to show my enthusiasm, but I also want to be professional and over all, I don´t want to have grammar mistakes!Any suggestion beside grammar is also very welcome. Thank you one more time!Here it goes:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express a keen interest in your graduate program. I am confident that my academic record, professional experience and enthusiasm make me a strong candidate to be consider for the position.
I have recently graduated from the University XXXXX, with a four year Bachelor of Engineering, European Degree, specialising in Building Construction Engineering. During my studies I enhanced strongly my analytical and problem solving skills. I excelled at my temwork skills and I gained strong leadership skills, having succesfully being group leader in many different projects during my studies.
As you can see from my resume, I commenced my professional work experience with XXXXXX as a graduate Engineer. This role involved assisting a Senior Engineer in the development of a three-story building. During this time I reinforced valuable skills as thinking laterally within the framework in order to meet the specific brief and all deadlines, problem solving, organisational and work prioritizing skills.
I am fully eligible to work in Australia and I am now keen to apply the skills that are outlined in the attached CV. An opportunity within your company would provide me with the chance to work in my professional field and start a career in Australia. I would appreciate the opportunity to meet you to discuss my skills, capabilities and professional experience in greater detail. Thank you in advance for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
XXXXX XXXXX
Ok, so I´m trying to apply to a graduate position in Australia,where I´m living. I want to show my enthusiasm, but I also want to be professional and over all, I don´t want to have grammar mistakes!Any suggestion beside grammar is also very welcome. Thank you one more time!Here it goes:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express a keen interest in your graduate program. I am confident that my academic record, professional experience and enthusiasm make me a strong candidate to be consider for the position.
I have recently graduated from the University XXXXX, with a four year Bachelor of Engineering, European Degree, specialising in Building Construction Engineering. During my studies I enhanced strongly my analytical and problem solving skills. I excelled at my temwork skills and I gained strong leadership skills, having succesfully being group leader in many different projects during my studies.
As you can see from my resume, I commenced my professional work experience with XXXXXX as a graduate Engineer. This role involved assisting a Senior Engineer in the development of a three-story building. During this time I reinforced valuable skills as thinking laterally within the framework in order to meet the specific brief and all deadlines, problem solving, organisational and work prioritizing skills.
I am fully eligible to work in Australia and I am now keen to apply the skills that are outlined in the attached CV. An opportunity within your company would provide me with the chance to work in my professional field and start a career in Australia. I would appreciate the opportunity to meet you to discuss my skills, capabilities and professional experience in greater detail. Thank you in advance for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
XXXXX XXXXX
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express a keen interest in your graduate program. I am confident that my academic record, professional experience and enthusiasm make me a strong candidate to be considered for acceptance . I have recently graduated from the University of XXXXX, with a four - year Bachelor of Engineering, European Degree, specialising in Building Construction Engineering.
- Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express a keen interest in your graduate program.
- I am confident that my academic record, professional experience and enthusiasm make me a strong candidate to be considered for acceptance .
- I have recently graduated from the University of XXXXX, with a four - year Bachelor of Engineering, European Degree, specialising in Building Construction Engineering.
- During my studies I developed my analytical skills, excelled at teamwork, and gained strong leadership skills, having succesfully been group leade r for several projects during my studies.
- As you can see from my resume, I commenced my professional work experience with XXXXXX as a graduate engineer.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express a keen interest in your graduate program. I am confident that my academic record, professional experience and enthusiasm make me a strong candidate to be considered for acceptance.
I have recently graduated from the University of XXXXX, with a four-year Bachelor of Engineering, European Degree, specialising in
I am writing to express a keen interest in your graduate program. I am confident that my academic record, professional experience and enthusiasm make me a strong candidate to be considered for acceptance.
I have recently graduated from the University of XXXXX, with a four-year Bachelor of Engineering, European Degree, specialising in
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