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Horse Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
I need help with my essay
My essay is about gangs. The title is gangs. The thesis statement is "Gangs seem to be increasing in size as well as increaasing in crime rates do to the use of weapons, smuggling, robbery, drugs, and homicide. Is this a good thesis for my topic?
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Hello Horse It's not quite clear at the moment. 1. By 'gangs are increasing in size', do you mean 'gangs are getting bigger' or 'there are more gangs'?
- Hello Horse It's not quite clear at the moment.
- 1.
- By 'gangs are increasing in size', do you mean 'gangs are getting bigger' or 'there are more gangs'?
- 2.
- Do you mean that gang crime is responsible for a big increase in crime rates, especially in relation to illegal weapons, smuggling, robbery, drug-peddling, drug-related crime, and homicide?
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Hello Horse
It's not quite clear at the moment.
1. By 'gangs are increasing in size', do you mean 'gangs are getting bigger'
or 'there are more gangs'?
2. Do you mean that gang crime is responsible for a big increase in crime rates,
especially in relation to illegal weapons, smuggling, robbery, drug-peddling,
drug-related crime, and homicide?
It's not quite clear at the moment.
1. By 'gangs are increasing in size', do you mean 'gangs are getting bigger'
or 'there are more gangs'?
2. Do you mean that gang crime is responsible for a big increase in crime rates,
especially in relation to illegal weapons, smuggling, robbery, drug-peddling,
drug-related crime, and homicide?
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