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Yobib Nartea Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

I need help with mt argumentative essay

My question is "How are urban spaces influenced by activist"?

My two main points are social movement and artistic activism, but i cant think of any counter-argument, any suggestions?

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If I ask you this question and your answer is just the words 'Social movement and artistic expression', this is not a suitable answer. I have no idea what you mean. An argument needs to be stated in the form of a sentence.

  • If I ask you this question and your answer is just the words 'Social movement and artistic expression', this is not a suitable answer.
  • I have no idea what you mean.
  • An argument needs to be stated in the form of a sentence.
  • eg Activists cause urban spaces to be strictly controlled by the government.
  • Until you clearly state an argument, you cannot present a counter argument.
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If I ask you this question and your answer is just the words 'Social movement and artistic expression', this is not a suitable answer. I have no idea what you mean.
An argument needs to be stated in the form of a sentence.
eg Activists cause urban spaces to be strictly controlled by the
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how about this?

While social movement promotes social changes through violence and crime. Artistic expression poses no threat and can positively impact urban spaces through the process of setting community goals to achieve.

its my argument

what do you think?

thanks
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Although some social movement such as the American Civil right movements emerges to promotes social changes through violent protest. Artistic expression, for instance, poses no threat and can positively impact urban spaces through the process of setting community goals to achieve.
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Artistic expression .. . . can positively impact urban spaces through the process of setting community goals to achieve.
I don't know what this means. It sounds vague to me.


In addition, your question asks you about activists, but your revised sentences do not mentioned activists. Why not?

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