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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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I need help with grammer!

hello everybody!
I need to write my CV in english, and I work as a group leader in "summerschool" company. I need your help, did I write it good?
• Escorted the teenagers groups - to the summerschool Centers in UK/U.S.A until their return home.
• Managed groups of 40 teenagers- responsibility for their personal well-being, academic levels and content of their studies and tours.
Please help me! thank you!!
  

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A until they returned home. I managed groups of 40 teenagers. I was responsible for their personal well-being, academic achievement (?

  • A until they returned home.
  • I managed groups of 40 teenagers.
  • I was responsible for their personal well-being, academic achievement (?
  • separating them into sections by academic level) and the content of their classes and tours.
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I escorted groups of teenagers to the Summerschool Centers in the UK and the U.S.A until they returned home.
I managed groups of 40 teenagers. I was responsible for their personal well-being, academic achievement (? separating them into sections by academic level) and the content of their classes and tours.
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WOW!

AlpheccaStars- Thank you very much!!!

If may I ask one more question:
If I'm working as a sales representative, and I want to say in my CV that I really good in my work
Can I write-
· Making more than 100% of the company's sales targets. ?
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I always exceeded the sales targets that my supervisor set for me.

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