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Bogucha Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
I need help with correcting the sentences ( i can put 2 together or change a word or even shorten the sentence, use only necessary words)
1. The terrain can be seen by obtaining a topographical map of the area one intends to cover. The area to be covered having been studied, the task is now what to carry within the pack.
2. Since Shanna wished to converse while she was in Sweden, she decided to study it.
3. A sentence ought not to have any words that are not entirely necessary, and for that matter, there should be no unnecessary sentences contained within a paragraph. This is true for the very same reason that a drawing, if it is to be a good drawing, should have no lines that are not completely necessary.
2. Since Shanna wished to converse while she was in Sweden, she decided to study it.
3. A sentence ought not to have any words that are not entirely necessary, and for that matter, there should be no unnecessary sentences contained within a paragraph. This is true for the very same reason that a drawing, if it is to be a good drawing, should have no lines that are not completely necessary.
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Hi, 1. The terrain can be seen by obtaining a topographical map of the area one intends to cover. The area to be covered having been studied, the task is now what to carry within the pack.
- Hi, 1.
- The terrain can be seen by obtaining a topographical map of the area one intends to cover.
- The area to be covered having been studied, the task is now what to carry within the pack.
- The area to be covered having been studied, the task is to decide what to carry in one's pack.
- After the area to be covered has been studied, the task is to decide what to carry in one's pack.
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Hi,
1. The terrain can be seen by obtaining a topographical map of the area one intends to cover. The area to be covered having been studied, the task is now what to carry within the pack.
The area to be covered having been studied, the task is to decide what to carry in one's pack.
After the area to be covered has been studied, the task is to decide wh
1. The terrain can be seen by obtaining a topographical map of the area one intends to cover. The area to be covered having been studied, the task is now what to carry within the pack.
The area to be covered having been studied, the task is to decide what to carry in one's pack.
After the area to be covered has been studied, the task is to decide wh
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Hi,
1. The terrain can be seen by obtaining a topographical map of the area one intends to cover. The area to be covered having been studied, the task is now what to carry within the pack.
The area to be covered having been studied, the task is to decide what to carry in one's pack.
After the area to be covered has been studied, the task is to decide wh
1. The terrain can be seen by obtaining a topographical map of the area one intends to cover. The area to be covered having been studied, the task is now what to carry within the pack.
The area to be covered having been studied, the task is to decide what to carry in one's pack.
After the area to be covered has been studied, the task is to decide wh
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Hello,
Not sure how far you can go here to minimize words but ...
1. Just as a good drawing should contain only necessary lines, paragraphs should contain only necessary sentences and sentences should contain only necessary words.
2. Shanna studied Swedish to converse while in Sweden.
3. A topographical map will show the terrain one intends to cover a
Not sure how far you can go here to minimize words but ...
1. Just as a good drawing should contain only necessary lines, paragraphs should contain only necessary sentences and sentences should contain only necessary words.
2. Shanna studied Swedish to converse while in Sweden.
3. A topographical map will show the terrain one intends to cover a
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