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Gray hat 195 Posted 4 years ago
Letter Writing

I need help with an email please

could u correct my errors in my essay? Please leave a comment if there's things that need fixing!

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Imagine you went to your capital city on a day trip. Write an e-mail to your friend telling him/her about the day. Include information about the journey there, the people you went with, what you did and what you bought.

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Dear Hannie,

How are you doing? How is your study? Is everything fine?

I'm writing this e-mail to introduce my capital city, which is Ha Noi, to you. I had a chance to go on a short trip to it on a special occasion. To tell you the truth, I travelled with my mom and had a blast together. Ha Noi is such a beautiful place that attracts loads of tourists over the last few years. Ha Noi is famous for Ho Chi Minh mausoleum, Temple of Literature, Ho Hoan Kiem Lake, etc. Those are tourist destinations we spent our downtime visiting. In the early morning, we tried to pack things to visit Ho Chi Minh mausoleum where we were able to immerse ourselves in a peaceful atmosphere and leave behind all the hustle and bustle of Ha Noi. We were grateful for admiring the gorgeous landscape there. Otherwise, we could know Ho Chi Minh president's lifestyle in the past and take good lessons away from it. Next, in the afternoon, we visited the popular historic site named Temple of Literature. which honors Vietnam's finest and most distinguished scholars. Going inside, we prayed for peace, happiness, and luck. Moreover, it was truly necessary for us to buy souvenirs for our family including calligraphic envelopes, wooden water puppets, and mini statues. Fortunately, I bought you a lovely key chain because you lost your own several days ago. Also, we had eaten lots of delicious traditional dishes and had a sit-down talking until the evening. We can't miss mentioning Ho Hoan Kiem Lake, can we? I have to admit the fact that there are tons of mesmerizing sceneries for taking photos along the lakeside. Literally, we felt like we were freshened up and recharged our batteries.

I finished writing the e-mail to describe my exciting trip to Hanoi. How do you feel after reading one? Hopefully, you will have an opportunity to go there with me someday.

Really looking forward to seeing your reply!

Best regards,

An.

  

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Dear Hannie, How are you doing? How is college/school? [ 1] your study?

  • Dear Hannie, How are you doing?
  • How is college/school?
  • [ 1] your study?
  • Is everything fine?
  • I'm writing this e-mail to introduce my capital city, which is tell you about my recent trip to Ha Noi, which is the capital city of my country.
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Dear Hannie,

How are you doing? How is college/school? [ 1] your study? Is everything fine?

I'm writing this e-mail to introduce my capital city, which is tell you about my recent trip to Ha Noi, which is the capital city

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