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Guest Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

I need help with a sentence!

Hello everybody!

I will have an article published in a medical journal and the editor asked me to eliminate 3 figures fom my paper (froma total of 7). I would like to know if it is correct to say the following:


Figures 3, 6 and 7 were eliminated from the article. Figures 1 and 2 were maintained. Figure 4 has been renumbered “Figure 3” and Figure 5 has been renumbered “Figure 4”. The legends will be rearranged.

I look forward to hearing from you!

Thanks a lot!
  

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Hello Guest You could say: Figures 3, 6 and 7 were deleted from the article. Figures 1 and 2 have been retained. Figure 4 has been renumbered “Figure 3” and Figure 5 has been renumbered “Figure 4”.

  • Hello Guest You could say: Figures 3, 6 and 7 were deleted from the article.
  • Figures 1 and 2 have been retained.
  • Figure 4 has been renumbered “Figure 3” and Figure 5 has been renumbered “Figure 4”.
  • The legends will be rearranged accordingly.
  • MrP
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Hello Guest

You could say:

Figures 3, 6 and 7 were deleted from the article. Figures 1 and 2 have been retained. Figure 4 has been renumbered “Figure 3” and Figure 5 has been renumbered “Figure 4”. The legends will be rearranged accordingly.

MrP
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Heloo MrP,

I am now registered so I can reply your message and thank you very much for your attention. You really helped me!

Best regards

Sunflower
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I have a question on the corrections you've made:

Is there any reason for using past tense in the first sentence and present perfect in the others? What about future in the last one? I hope you have the oportunity to answer, it would help me a lot!

Thanks!

Sunflower
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Hello Sunflower

It's my pleasure.

You could also say '3, 6, and 7 have been deleted from the article'. In fact that would probably be better.

I was assuming that your note would accompany the article. I therefore used the present perfect because although the act of deleting some figures and retaining others took place in the past, it has a relation to the present: y
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Hello MrP:

Thank you very much for your attention!
It is correct that this note will accompany the revised article that I am sending back to the Editor.
Is that correct if I use the present perfect tense in the last setence as well, instead of the future tense? I will send him the revised manuscript together with the figures (I deleted 3 from a total of 7, as requsted by the e

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