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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
I need help with a motivation letter
Please help me to write a motivation letter. Got Stucked and don't understans what to write
I am writing to you to apply for the ***** in *********. I successfully completed my Bachelor’s degree in June this year and I am committed and motivated to study for Master’s.
During the past four years I studied at the faculty of international economic relations at ********university. The emphasis of my studies were commerce, economics, management and foreign languages (English and French). Management has interested me greatly. Everything in our live is connected with management- we take our decisions everyday, every hour, every second. We try to maximize our profit and to minimize our losses and to get the best result. The role of people who are ready to take such kind of decisions of responsibilities will be important in business and in our world.
I want to take part in this program because of several reasons. First of all, I believe that having accomplish this program I will be able to use my knowledge, adapt and modify the theoretical constructs as required in order to meet my company's needs as a good manager. I believe obtaining a Master's Degree in International Management will provide the necessary background for me to anticipate and react to ever-changing environments in the world
Secondly, the fact that this program is in English attracts me greatly because first of all it means that an international team of professors from top universities, successful businessmen, prominent economists and politicians are involved and their will share their experience with students. Also I am interested because English was my fist language in the university and I don’t want to lose my language skills.
Thirdly, this program allows its student to work during the studies, so I will be able to start to put my knowledge into practice. As I didn’t have a chance to work during my studies at MGIMO it sounds very good to me. Furthermore, such kind of possibility will allow me to make my living.
I am writing to you to apply for the ***** in *********. I successfully completed my Bachelor’s degree in June this year and I am committed and motivated to study for Master’s.
During the past four years I studied at the faculty of international economic relations at ********university. The emphasis of my studies were commerce, economics, management and foreign languages (English and French). Management has interested me greatly. Everything in our live is connected with management- we take our decisions everyday, every hour, every second. We try to maximize our profit and to minimize our losses and to get the best result. The role of people who are ready to take such kind of decisions of responsibilities will be important in business and in our world.
I want to take part in this program because of several reasons. First of all, I believe that having accomplish this program I will be able to use my knowledge, adapt and modify the theoretical constructs as required in order to meet my company's needs as a good manager. I believe obtaining a Master's Degree in International Management will provide the necessary background for me to anticipate and react to ever-changing environments in the world
Secondly, the fact that this program is in English attracts me greatly because first of all it means that an international team of professors from top universities, successful businessmen, prominent economists and politicians are involved and their will share their experience with students. Also I am interested because English was my fist language in the university and I don’t want to lose my language skills.
Thirdly, this program allows its student to work during the studies, so I will be able to start to put my knowledge into practice. As I didn’t have a chance to work during my studies at MGIMO it sounds very good to me. Furthermore, such kind of possibility will allow me to make my living.
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Anon: You have made a good start. I've highlighted the places where there are grammatical errors. I am writing to you to apply for the ***** in *********.
- Anon: You have made a good start.
- I've highlighted the places where there are grammatical errors.
- I am writing to you to apply for the ***** in *********.
- I successfully completed my Bachelor’s degree in June this year and I am committed and motivated to study for a Master’s degree .
- During the past four years I studied at the faculty of international economic relations at **university.
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Anon:
You have made a good start. I've highlighted the places where there are grammatical errors.
I am writing to you to apply for the ***** in *********. I successfully completed my Bachelor’s degree in June this year and I am committed and motivated to study for a
You have made a good start. I've highlighted the places where there are grammatical errors.
I am writing to you to apply for the ***** in *********. I successfully completed my Bachelor’s degree in June this year and I am committed and motivated to study for a
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