I need help to write... please. ^^

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Teacher gave me another chance.. I forgot to write a paragraph about science, non-science and pseudoscience about my topic which is raw food vs cooked food. I need to write how my topic difference from others. I think my topic is related to science because I wrote about the benefits... how healthy raw food are.. and what happens to it when cooked .. etc.

I really need help because if I do it correctly.. I will get 90!! instead of 65.

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

So, write it and we'll check it.

XHealthY · Answer

Yes, but I don't know what means by that. I need examples or something. I really want that 90. ^_^

Mister Micawber · Answer

Then get busy and start googling!

XHealthY · Answer

He he. OK. I really love this forum, I actually prefer coming here than making an appointment to meet with a tutor. I know that if I write an essay and show it here, you guys would correct my grammar , etc.
So I know that I need to write in order for you guys to help me out. I am going to write the paragraph and post it here.^^

I am so stressed because I am falling back behind in English. I am trying my best to get good grades for better GPA. Anyhow, I am going to start writing later or tomorrow. I have to do some English.

Mister Micawber · Answer

We'll be waiting!

XHealthY · Answer

Is it something like this? I am not done yet.

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Science, non-science, and pseudoscience

Real Scientist studies show that raw food cures diseases and protect against cancer. Another study shows that you will feel more energetic, weight lost, feel younger, and have clear skin by eating raw food which it’s a fact because it has the entire nutrient that our body needs. Fake scientist (pseudoscience) thinks that we won’t live longer by eating cooked foods. Also,

Mister Micawber · Answer

Authentic scientific studies show that raw food cures diseases and protects against cancer. Another study shows that you will feel more energetic, lose weight, feel younger, and have clear skin by eating raw food, because it has all the nutrients that our body needs. Some pseudoscientific reports, however, have suggested that we won't live longer by eating cooked foods.

I have fixed the grammar, but I don't think you have really attacked the problem.

XHealthY · Answer

So I am explaining how my topic relates to one of these areas and I differentiated between them?
I need to write more, so hang in there (he he) thanks a lot! I appreciate it.

PS: My topic is raw foods vs cooked food. ^^

XHealthY · Answer

OK, I am done writing. My topic was Raw food versus Cooked food. I forgot to write a paragraph about me explaning how my topic relates to science,pseudoscience, and non-science and I differentiated between them. I got a 0 out of 25.. hoping to get a 25 out of 25. So I hope someone can help me correct. I don't know if I included non science.. I did wrote a bit, but not sure if correct.

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Authentic scientific studies show that raw food cures diseases and protects against cancer. Another study shows that you will feel more energetic, lose weight, feel younger, and have clear skin by eating raw food, because it has all the nutrients that our body needs. Some pseudoscientific reports, however, have suggested that we won't live longer by eating cooked foods. Another false reports show that fiber is lost while cooking. In fact, studies have shown that boiling increases fiber, lower cholesterol, and regulate blood sugars and diabetic. Some doctors are convincing their patients to go at least 60-80 percent raw or to eat healthy. Also, they may tell a patient to stop eating a specific food because it’s bad for them. People who learn about these may be non-science, so they start helping out people that eating healthy prevents diseases, makes them younger, have clear skin, etc. So they are speculative thought, rather than with facts, until they search on the internet for facts.

Mister Micawber · Answer

Authentic scientific studies show that raw food cures diseases and protects against cancer. Another study shows that you will feel more energetic, lose weight, feel younger, and have clear skin by eating raw food, because it has all the nutrients that our body needs. Some pseudoscientific reports, however, have suggested that we won't live longer by eating cooked foods. Another false report shows that fiber is lost while cooking. In fact, studies have shown that boiling increases fiber, lowers cholesterol, and regulates blood sugars. Some doctors are convincing their patients to eat at least 60-80 percent raw foods to eat healthily. Also, they may tell a patient to stop eating a specific food because it's bad for them. People who learn about these may not be scientific, but they start explaining to people that eating healthy prevents diseases, makes them younger, have clear skin, etc. So theirs is speculative thought, rather than factual, until they search on the internet for facts.

However, I am still not sure what your teacher is looking for. 0 out of 25 is pretty bad.

I need help to write... please. ^^

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