I need help to finalize my motivation letter *Urgently*

Dear everyone

It's my first time writing a motivation letter. I'm applying for a Master and I'm not sure if the content of my letter is suitable enough.

I realy appreciate if anyone can comment about it.

Dear Sir, Madam

I, (my name), am a graduate of Bachelor Degree of Building Surveying from University ... in Malaysia in October 2016. I am writing this letter to show my interest to join the Master of Science in Interior and Spatial Design program at ... for academic year 2017, February intake. Studying at ..., a well-known technical university, will give me the opportunity to benefit from its dynamic environment which develops creative thinking, under training and supervision of the best lecturers in my field of choice. Recent methods and realistic case studies in this university can prepare me to work in the industry after graduation.

My willingness to study in building field, started from my teenage hood when I found out about my parents' background in building related jobs. It influenced me to enter a vocational high school to study architectural drawing and to follow the same approach by taking an associate degree at ... University in Tehran, Iran . I was eager to study in a more dynamic educational system and also passionate to challenge myself by living abroad to face my weaknesses and develop my diligent characteristics. Therefore, I started my bachelor in one of the best universities in Malaysia. During my bachelor, I gained knowledge on various aspects of building and factors affecting occupants’ comfort and health.

Taking my study path in different Built Environment fields, Architectural Drawing and Building Surveying, widened my view and persuaded me to enhance my knowledge in other related fields. Following my excitement in Green Building, I carried out my thesis and internship in relation to this area that taught me important factors in green and sustainable design. In addition, I took an ... online course by ... University (Netherlands) on Urban Design and gained some basic knowledge that attracted me more to this field. In addition, my previous ability in painting helped me a lot in representing my ideas. Having taken all these steps and the enthusiasm to design interior spaces, I find myself qualified to fulfil the requirements to study in Interior and Spatial Design program.

I privilege the refurbishment and renovation of interior environment, where possible, rather than building demolition, to keep the architectural identity of cities. That is why, in my thesis, I focused on replacement of building elements to improve the existing buildings performance. I believe, whether to build a new building or renovate its interior spaces, only a proper interior and spatial design can positively enhance the application of the interior environment. In my country, Iran, many of the old buildings are being replaced with modern ones to response the needs for new spaces with different functions which are not in harmony with the local architecture. On the other hand, not all new projects are designed with proper interior spaces. That is why, I have a strong desire to be able to apply my knowledge in designing interior spaces for both existing and new settings in my country. Maintaining the existing precious buildings, and at the same time, properly meeting the needs for any range of interior functions are highly required in Iran where there is a huge number of old and historical buildings that can be saved and used for different functions. It is enthusiastic for me to be involved in undertaking such projects.

Therefore, it is desirable for me to take my postgraduate studies in a country which is well known for its history and knowledge in design and architecture. By studying at ... I hope to learn about the recent design techniques and strategies so that I can apply them back in my country. The cross cultural learning environment of ... University which is specialised in architecture, industrial design and engineering, ranked in top 25 technical universities in the world, is a great chance for me to develop my personal and professional skills.

To better introduce my background and skills I have enclosed the CV and portfolio together with this motivation letter. Thank you for considering my application.

Yours faithfully,