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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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I don't define myself pacifist. But I am against wars. I think that to die in a war is a waste.
I don't think that the one who die there is a hero.
I believe that he is just a poor young guy. Further more he could have much longer and happier life. He could have a wife and children. He just started his life and now he is gone.
It's not reasonable. If countries do not agree with each other, they should discuss over and over again until they'll find the right solution. Instead of sending their sons to the war.
We don't need to fight, to hurt each other. Words are so powerful and it can lead to great solutions. You don't have to hate the people in your enemy country. They really didn't do anything to hurt you. They didn't manage their country and decided what is going to happen. So before you judge a person by the place he lives in consider that he is just like you, he want happy and peaceful life.
I don't define myself pacifist. But I am against wars. I think that to die in a war is a waste.
I don't think that the one who die there is a hero.
I believe that he is just a poor young guy. Further more he could have much longer and happier life. He could have a wife and children. He just started his life and now he is gone.
It's not reasonable. If countries do not agree with each other, they should discuss over and over again until they'll find the right solution. Instead of sending their sons to the war.
We don't need to fight, to hurt each other. Words are so powerful and it can lead to great solutions. You don't have to hate the people in your enemy country. They really didn't do anything to hurt you. They didn't manage their country and decided what is going to happen. So before you judge a person by the place he lives in consider that he is just like you, he want happy and peaceful life.
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Hi Anon Here are some suggestions: I don't define myself as a pacifist , b ut I am against wars. I think that to die in a war is a waste. I don't think that someone who die s in combat is a hero.
- Hi Anon Here are some suggestions: I don't define myself as a pacifist , b ut I am against wars.
- I think that to die in a war is a waste.
- I don't think that someone who die s in combat is a hero.
- I believe that he is just a poor young guy.
- Furthermore, he could have had a much longer and happier life.
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Hi Anon
Here are some suggestions:
I don't define myself as a pacifist, but I am against wars. I think that to die in a war is a waste.
I don't think that someone
Here are some suggestions:
I don't define myself as a pacifist, but I am against wars. I think that to die in a war is a waste.
I don't think that someone
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