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Nana555 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
I need help pls pls pls
I want to send to a proff .
Dear Dr. Hong Leai,
Thank you for your consideration. I'm really interested to have an opportunity to work under your guidance. I did have a look on your profile and your students' projects. Overall, their projects attract me to send you an email with a brief of myself.
I have a full scholarship from the government to continue my education. I just want to make sure that the NASC college is under Dalehouse University. That because the universities list that given to the students included Dalehousie university not NSAC university and I'm worried that they will not approve my scholarship if I get from NSAC.
Dear Dr. Hong Leai,
Thank you for your consideration. I'm really interested to have an opportunity to work under your guidance. I did have a look on your profile and your students' projects. Overall, their projects attract me to send you an email with a brief of myself.
I have a full scholarship from the government to continue my education. I just want to make sure that the NASC college is under Dalehouse University. That because the universities list that given to the students included Dalehousie university not NSAC university and I'm worried that they will not approve my scholarship if I get from NSAC.
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) Dear Dr. Hong Leai, Thank you for your consideration. I'm really interested i n having an opportunity to work und er your guidance.
- ) Dear Dr.
- Hong Leai, Thank you for your consideration.
- I'm really interested i n having an opportunity to work und er your guidance.
- I took a look at your profile and your students' projects.
- They were so attractive that I felt compelled to send you an email with a brief description of myself.
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Here's how I would suggest modifying it: (Of course, I did take a little liberty with the second sentence, and I'm only guessing about what you meant to say in the second paragraph because I'm not sure exactly what "NSAC" is.)
Dear Dr. Hong Leai,
Thank you for your consideration. I'm really interested in having an opportunity to work unde
Dear Dr. Hong Leai,
Thank you for your consideration. I'm really interested in having an opportunity to work unde
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