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Please help me to check my story. I want to join completion, which is about writing story with only 50 words.

I tried, but first story it is 63 words while others 50. I need help to make first story and others excellent. Please help me???

I know maybe my stories are not exciting and fun, but please help me. You can critics my stories “I am not writer”.

These are the three stories.

Love at the end

There were a happy family from parent, four girls and one boy. They divorced many times because of animosity people, but all the time they come back because of their children. They decided to get divorce after their children get married. After their children got married, parents felt that they need each another. They discover what love means but the death took it.

You or people

She is always follows what people are telling her. If she chooses something, she would change her mind because of people. She does what people order her to do. One day she wake up and realized that she is 50 years old, and she didn’t achieve anything in her life.

Faithful for the root

He lived there since he was a child. Every day he wake up early and go there to work with holding happiness in his arm. The government decided to take his life, his land because they want to build hotel in that land. They took the land and he died.

Please

Nona the brit · Accepted Answer

Hi Silentwar,

Can I tell you this gave me a bit of a giggle. Such depressing stories and then.....your signature! A funny juxtaposition. It was fun to work within the constraints of 50 words and I've had a go at the first one for you. 'Till death do us part' is part of the marriage ceremony and it gives a nicer little twist than 'till death took it'.

The parents of five children separated then reunited for the sake of those children - three times! They agreed to finally divorce when the children left home, however, astonishingly they then found that they needed each another. Almost too late, they discovered what love really means - till death do us part.

Silentwar · Answer

Hi nona the brit,

You have a right to giggle “Maybe it’s funny”, but all these three stories is part of my life. Especially the first story, it is my family story.

Even that I am still life and I am happy. I will never let desperation enter my heart.

I can’t pretend nothing sad happened in my life, I really find difficult to deal with that.

Thanks a lot

Nona the brit · Answer

Sorry, I do hope I didn't offend you. Just the combination of sad stories and then your signature tickled my funny bone.

I guess everyone has sad things in their background.

Silentwar · Answer

Hi nona,

Thanks for your apologizing, honestly I have a lot of things in my background " things strange".

but what can I say, these life like it or not.

Thanks a lot

Candle · Answer

0 Thank nona,  you always speak true to your friends and your giggles could make everybody's mind stronger.  It's your style. 0-

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