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Hi guys/galsI am trying to translate my webpage to English and since that is not my first language I am afraid something does not sound natural or there are some grammar errors.Is there someone that could take a look at it and let me know what needs to be changed?&lt;a href="www.datinghowtos.com"&gt;www.datinghowtos.com&lt;/a&gt;You can skip the articles in italic, so in total is just like one page, really quickly to take a look and I would really appreciate it.

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

Your link does not work for me.

In any case, we prefer you to paste your text here. That makes it a lot easier for us to edit it.

Thanks, Clive

Gretchenplay · Answer

Haha that site is such a load of rubbish, and you're right the English is not too good. Here's a bit I have fixed for you:

All the things I wish I had known a long time ago about how to interact and succeed with women, no matter what you look like… keep reading and you will learn how to make women chase you

Dear Fellow, (fellow what? Fellow desperate male?) just give me a few minutes of your time to show you a life changer. It has changed thousands of men's lives, and now you have the chance to be one of them. Using techniques that have always been used by psychologists, you can learn how a women's mind works and then take advantage of it.

Alejo Go Li · Answer

Hi Clive

Thanks for trying to help.

Here is some text still needs to be reviewed:

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Clive · Answer

Hi,

Here are a few edits.

Clive

Here is some text still needs to be reviewed:

I have personally found thousands of similar books and free information on the internet that didn't help. Books like "How to become an alpha male" that actually help are pretty rare.Please don't pass by this opportunity.

*You will be redirected to the seller page.

Or Get a 25 Page Sample for Free!

Easy steps to buy:

Click on “Buy Now!”
Go to the page bottom and check the price and package.
Choose the payment method (PayPal, credit/debit card)
Consider other books from the same author and register to get exclusive material.
Download the PDF book.

Advantages you get when buying an electronic book.

You won’t pay for shipping fees.
You will get the book right away.
You help the environment using paper free books.

Order now and do not regret later all the wasted years without knowing all the secrets unveiled here.
Sincerely,
Alejo Goli
PS: Be part of the alpha male community now!
Check other books from the same author:

I need help checking my webpage translation.

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