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00I would appreciate some help with my motivation letter. Please feel free to comment on anything: Content, grammar, spelling... you name it! 05000 The deadline for this letter is 25 january, so I'm sort of in a hurry.02br
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00Dear ***,02br
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00 I am currently studying my second year at the Business programme at the ZZZ. I am now seeking an interesting challenge an excellent contribution to my education by applying for one exchange term in YYY.02br
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00 At an early age I developed parts of my personality trough sports. For many years I competed a lot in show jumping with my horses and was for some years one of the representatives of the Swedish National Team. Competing made me discover the essentiality of working hard for reaching your goals. I feel that many of these things I developed trough competing I now use as an advantage at school. 02br
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00 I have always believed that an international perspective is very important in any economist’s education. Not only is it important to learn about the economic situation of the world, it is also important to learn about, and from, different cultures. I know for certain that this has helped me, both academically and personally. I feel that my international experience has shown me how to respect other cultures and has also given me a genuine interest in other parts of the world.02br
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00 As a curious citizen of the international world, I love to travel and to experience new parts of the world. As a result of this, I have participated in several projects with an international connection during my time at the university. During the last term, I participated as a “Student Buddy” for the exchange students at the ZZZ. As a Student Buddy, I got the chance to show the exchange students [the town where I study], the Swedish people and our culture. This has both given me a change to get to know people from foreign countries and to learn more about their interesting home destinations. I was also selected to represent my university at the International Week in St. Gallen, Switzerland. I have realized that the international perspective is something very important to me, something I value having in my life.02br
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00 Besides studying I also enjoy working with my own company. I learn a great deal about the world of companies; how to start and run a business, selling a product and the contact with the customer. This company gives me the change to do something I genuinely enjoy and it really puts my education in an excellent spot. Through my company I also get numerous international contacts. I have for instance visited Hong Kong and China several times through my company, visiting fairs and meeting clients. My hopes are to expand my business to new horizons and I thus see it as a great opportunity to get to know the Canadian market at an early stage.02br
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00 I have always been interested in languages and I therefore chose to study several languages in upper secondary school. Besides English, I also studied German and French. Languages are, in my opinion, very important in several aspects. Not only is it essential in social situations, but it is also of great importance as an entrepreneur when it comes to communicating with clients and potential customers in order to understand their customs and their needs. I consequently see YYY and *** as a great opportunity for me to improve my language abilities. Apart from English, I will also be able to improve my French, something that I look forward to with great interest.02br
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00 Canada would be an excellent choice for me, both for my academic career and for my future business plans. YYY is known to be one of the best business universities in the world and it has always been a goal for me to study at an internationally acclaimed university. I think of this opportunity as a privilege, and a way to improve as a person. I have high ambitions for my future and international contacts are a part of that future. I feel that YYY can give me the best education in my field with high skilled professors and students in an international environment that motivates me. 02br
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00Thank you for your consideration.02br
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00 Yours sincerely,02br
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