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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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I need help to make a strong introduction about "Water can be used for fun and enjoyment" at least five sentences including the rules of making an introduction as thesis statements, predictor, topic, control idea, etc..
I did one sentence and I need at least 5 sentences to make a strong introduction
"Water can be used for fun and enjoyment such as sliding down an inflatable water slide, filling little balloons with water and throwing them at each other, swimming, surfring, and thrrowing water at someone who is sleeping a long time."
Could someone help me to make a strong introduction.
Sincerely,
Spring Season
!
How are you
?
I need help to make a strong introduction about "Water can be used for fun and enjoyment" at least five sentences including the rules of making an introduction as thesis statements, predictor, topic, control idea, etc..
I did one sentence and I need at least 5 sentences to make a strong introduction
"Water can be used for fun and enjoyment such as sliding down an inflatable water slide, filling little balloons with water and throwing them at each other, swimming, surfring, and thrrowing water at someone who is sleeping a long time."
Could someone help me to make a strong introduction.
Sincerely,
Spring Season
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Sorry Spring, we don't write stuff for people - but come back with your five sentences and we'll check them over. I don't think your sentence is really an introduction. Think about what idea it is exploring, and try to phrase a sentence introducing that as a topic, without the details.
- Sorry Spring, we don't write stuff for people - but come back with your five sentences and we'll check them over.
- I don't think your sentence is really an introduction.
- Think about what idea it is exploring, and try to phrase a sentence introducing that as a topic, without the details.
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Sorry Spring, we don't write stuff for people - but come back with your five sentences and we'll check them over.
I don't think your sentence is really an introduction. Think about what idea it is exploring, and try to phrase a sentence introducing that as a topic, without the details.
I don't think your sentence is really an introduction. Think about what idea it is exploring, and try to phrase a sentence introducing that as a topic, without the details.
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Thank you so much.
I didn't know about that.
Could you check my introduction as soon as possible?
Water is the colorless liquid that falls as rain, is necessary for life to exist. Water has importance inside cells and externally. This may be because it has interesting chemical and physical properties. Therefore, people like to use water for fun such as sliding down
I didn't know about that.
Could you check my introduction as soon as possible?
Water is the colorless liquid that falls as rain, is necessary for life to exist. Water has importance inside cells and externally. This may be because it has interesting chemical and physical properties. Therefore, people like to use water for fun such as sliding down
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Hi!
Thank you so much.
I didn't know that.
Could you help me and check about my introduction as soon as possible.
" Water is the colorless liquid that falls as rain, is necessary for life to exist. Water has importance inside cells and externally. This may be because it has interesting chemical and physical properties. Therefore, people like to use water for
Thank you so much.
I didn't know that.
Could you help me and check about my introduction as soon as possible.
" Water is the colorless liquid that falls as rain, is necessary for life to exist. Water has importance inside cells and externally. This may be because it has interesting chemical and physical properties. Therefore, people like to use water for
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SpingSeason, you are still missing the point of the introduction. Your new introduction is just thrown-together facts about water, and the interesting chemical and physical properties have nothing to do with how people use water for fun, so the "Therefore" transition is entirely inappropriate.
You don't need to list the ways that water is fun in the introduction. You can say that although
You don't need to list the ways that water is fun in the introduction. You can say that although
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" Water is the colourless liquid that falls as rain, is necessary for life to exist. Water has important cells for the human body inside and externally. This may be because water has interesting chemical and physical properties. So, people often used water for fun and enjoyment such as sliding down an inflatable water slides, swimming, and surfing"
water has interesting chemical and p
water has interesting chemical and p
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I did my best.
" Water is the colourless liquid that falls as rain, is necessary for life to exist. Water has important cells for the human body inside and externally. This may be because water has interesting chemical and physical properties. So, people often used water for fun and enjoyment such as sliding down an inflatable water slides, filling little balloons with water and throw
" Water is the colourless liquid that falls as rain, is necessary for life to exist. Water has important cells for the human body inside and externally. This may be because water has interesting chemical and physical properties. So, people often used water for fun and enjoyment such as sliding down an inflatable water slides, filling little balloons with water and throw
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No.
If you were writing about the essential nature of water for human life to exist, your introduction, aside from the sentence about fun, would work. You are not. You are writing about using water for recreational activities. This miscellaneous collection of facts about water do NOT relate to the recreational aspects of water.
Please re-read my prior post, which I have edited so
If you were writing about the essential nature of water for human life to exist, your introduction, aside from the sentence about fun, would work. You are not. You are writing about using water for recreational activities. This miscellaneous collection of facts about water do NOT relate to the recreational aspects of water.
Please re-read my prior post, which I have edited so
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Sorry, I didn't see your post before.
Thank you so much.
I hope it works now.
“Water is the colourless liquid that falls as rain, is necessary for life. Water had interesting chemical and physical properties. It's also a source of enjoyment and a part of many recreational activities. Water can be used for fun such as sliding down an inflatable water slides, filli
Thank you so much.
I hope it works now.
“Water is the colourless liquid that falls as rain, is necessary for life. Water had interesting chemical and physical properties. It's also a source of enjoyment and a part of many recreational activities. Water can be used for fun such as sliding down an inflatable water slides, filli
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I think you need to talk to your teacher in person.
It seems our advice is not helping you here.
It seems our advice is not helping you here.
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Dear Grammar Geek,
I appreciate your effort with me.
Could you tell me what the wrong was I did it in the last introduction?
What's the rules to write a good introduction? give me examples like, I have to write ..., I should write...., etc.
Thank you so much again and I'm so sorry if I took your time with me.
Sincerely,
Spring Season.
I appreciate your effort with me.
Could you tell me what the wrong was I did it in the last introduction?
What's the rules to write a good introduction? give me examples like, I have to write ..., I should write...., etc.
Thank you so much again and I'm so sorry if I took your time with me.
Sincerely,
Spring Season.
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